| 11. | All three use the Septuagint version of Isaiah with one slight rewording.
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| 12. | It is a slight rewording of Mark 1 : 5.
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| 13. | It could probably be fixed with a fairly limited number of rewordings.
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| 14. | Could we find another rewording that's less problematic?
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| 15. | :Your sentence is difficult to correct without completely rewording.
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| 16. | I've done some rewording and re-arranging.
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| 17. | Rewording technical text is hard but achievable with some experience.
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| 18. | I'd appreciate any help in rewording that sentence.
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| 19. | Number of rewording suggestions have been put forward ( see below ).
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| 20. | :I've done a little rewording of the conviction information.
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