| 11. | SUBHEAD IN COPYfGaramond Bk . . I . . s14 l18Reaching a dealo
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| 12. | Maybe the first paragraph could have its own subhead, for example.
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| 13. | *I'd suggest making the heads and subheads more telegraphic.
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| 14. | *Repetition in the heads and subheads is best avoided.
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| 15. | Maybe a subhead for the revision of 1839 would do.
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| 16. | The subheads reported an angry denunciation of Bush by the wily Saddam Hussein.
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| 17. | We might go in several times, change the headline, the subhead.
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| 18. | *Many of the section heads and subheads seem too long to me.
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| 19. | Images normally should not displace subheads or overlap sections.
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| 20. | *Wikipedia heads and subheads use a telegraphic style as much as possible.
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