| 11. | :The wordiness is not needed here ( an " incidents " noticeboard ).
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| 12. | He's cut down the game plan and the wordiness in the game plan.
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| 13. | Definite wordiness in going over it further.
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| 14. | There is no universally accepted solution to the trade-off between inclusiveness and wordiness.
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| 15. | Legislators say the wordiness and number of amendments crafted by the Legislature aren't problems.
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| 16. | Suratman has progressed little beyond the wordiness common among writers schooled in the aesthetics of the 1950s.
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| 17. | Interesting enough, ARTEST4ECHO and I agreed about the wordiness of this proposed edit ( semicolon ).
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| 18. | Maintaining the tone of the composer's prose is vital; wordiness, however, is taboo.
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| 19. | I also think the whole " Equipment " section could use a quick once-over for wordiness.
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| 20. | This is resulting in a lot wordiness, gameguide-ish text, and NPOV bias or fluff.
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