| 21. | You should find a way to reword that expresses your intended meaning.
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| 22. | New Balance would be asked to reword its ads and relabel its products.
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| 23. | Karl obliges, but Susan rewords the reference before Karl sends it off.
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| 24. | Had to reword the short phrases into full paragraphs.
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| 25. | I reword the disputed section, trying to work toward more neutral wording.
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| 26. | A simple " Please just drop this, or reword it more helpfully.
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| 27. | You can however cite their material or reword it.
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| 28. | Maybe a reword to the following would sound better:
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| 29. | I left edit summaries asking to have more knowledgeable persons reword and correct.
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| 30. | Please reword to explain or avoid the seeming inconsistency.
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