| 21. | Each division was furthered segmented by headings and subheadings.
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| 22. | Now with a map and fewer subheadings, the section has definitely improved.
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| 23. | Each of them already has a separate page that covers the subheadings listed.
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| 24. | The new subheading appears in its proper place in the index : fine.
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| 25. | POV in subheadings can also be negative in tone.
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| 26. | I linked coaching tree and removed the Assistant coaches subheading per your suggestion.
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| 27. | I'd suggest removing the empty subheadings above.
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| 28. | It currently has 14 subheadings just for that section.
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| 29. | I would suggest under the " Legacy " subheading.
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| 30. | The subheading " free of charge " is there for a reason.
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