| 21. | His often rhetorical approach to poetry and occasional " wordiness " has led some critics to compare him with Swinburne.
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| 22. | He abhorred pomposity and wordiness, regarding journalism as a spontaneous ballet that could seldom be perfect because of daily deadlines.
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| 23. | Since the idea is to summarise the biography in that section I felt it would benefit by axing the excessive wordiness.
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| 24. | Bradley poked fun at Clinton's wordiness when asked what differences would be apparent if he were in the White House.
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| 25. | *I agree with Karanacs that one more go around with a copy editor to reduce wordiness would benefit the article enormously.
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| 26. | Here's an example of wordiness : instead of deciding to move the team, maybe say he just moved the team?
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| 27. | I think the copy editing thing to reduce wordiness and simplify where possible is the main thing holding this article back right now.
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| 28. | But details can also pile up to the point of inertia, and the spark of this narrative almost smothers in wordiness and redundancy.
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| 29. | Neither quality is easily transmitted while giving a lengthy, prepared speech; wordiness, after all, is one of his chief shortcomings.
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| 30. | ;Comments : User is aware of sourcing guidelines but continues to add " fan " information to article and add wordiness to sentences.
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