On the second reference we just need to say " Kurosawa halted production for a day to mourn his wife's death " ) and overall wordiness.
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Your sentences are occasionally a little long here, especially in the first paragraph, mostly due to wordiness . " Quickly found themselves in the cellar "?
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Lysander reported to the ephors that " Athens is taken . " The ephors complained of his wordiness, stating that " taken " would have been sufficient.
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My " Weak Keep " is based on potential, not actual, value ( apologies for wordiness )-Markeer 13 : 40, 24 December 2007 ( UTC)
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I also agree with him that simple wording is often misleading and sometimes a few more words are needed for accuracy, rather than dismissing such as " wordiness ".
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Putin speaks in a clipped, matter-of-fact style, a world away from the wordiness of Gorbachev, or Yeltsin's earthy and often incoherent utterances.
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Berman, who also wrote the screenplay, has borrowed from a lot of movies : Almodovar's Fiestaware look, Eric Rohmer's wordiness, Woody Allen's hijinks.
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McComas, however, dismissed his 1949 " Collected Tales ", saying that " we freely admit we find Mr de la Mare's self-consciously subtle wordiness unreadable ".
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Furthermore, with that bold red font edit you refer to, I actually had merged 2 posts to make them more concise and cut down on the size of the page by eliminating wordiness.
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The production, directed by Mark Brokaw, opened Tuesday at off-Broadway's Playwrights Horizons, and except for some wordiness in an overlong second act, couldn't be more satisfying.
