| 1. | A few redlinks might be OK . Paragraphing a little disjointed in places.
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| 2. | The spelling, grammar and paragraphing are all secure here and were beforehand.
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| 3. | Paragraphing needs attention ( there are stubbies ), and so does the sectioning.
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| 4. | Throughout, you might see if the paragraphing can be smoothed out a little.
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| 5. | Be sure to add at the end of each line in order to have proper paragraphing.
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| 6. | The letter has multiple short paragraphs, with scribed, single-lines showing the paragraphing.
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| 7. | That's the purpose of paragraphing : to give the reader a breather by sensibly breaking up the prose.
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| 8. | The printer's manuscript was further edited, adding paragraphing and punctuation to the first third of the text.
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| 9. | She was having a really hard time with spelling and paragraphing and putting into words what she was trying to say.
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| 10. | As to writing style, I tend to write in declarative, simple sentences and use standard paragraphing and context connections.
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