General notes on re-edit (14th March 10 -jaminday) • Removed some unnecessary sentences to reduce verbosity and streamline. • Tried to avoid any references to it being a manual as we have tried to move away from this term within the document • Removed early references to Linux in the prologue (before reader gets to section on Linux) - we are trying to target this at new users who may not initally connect Linux with Ubuntu. • Moved Contact Details and info on contacting RE any changes etc to end of prologue (not sure if there was a reason for this being earlier, but felt to me like it broke the 'flow' of the document) • Removed comparison of unix to MS Windows (e.g. “originating long before MS Windows) - this sounds like marketing talk and is unnecessary • Need review of changes to last section ”Is Ubuntu right for you” प्रस्तावना
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